Friday, August 14, 2009

I Still Remember Comments

Rating: 5.0

I still remember those late night calls
how you were there to catch me from all my falls
you always knew just what to do to cheer me up
all you had to do was tell me 'sup'
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Vanessa Cortes
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 15 August 2009

Very well expressed emotion. Love seems sweeter when not fruitful. Nice poem.

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Unknown Noneofurs 15 August 2009

This poem is really good Really caught my attention I can really relate to it I can tell a lot about you from this poem Keep it up very good poem 10 + + +

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Danny H 15 August 2009

Sounds like a wonderful friend. Good luck to the best of you, keep your mind clear and keep beleiving and seeing things clearly.

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Romeo Della Valle 15 August 2009

Dear Vanessa, the transparency of your poem reveals the real you, with clarity and feelings deep from the heart...What more can I say at this point that I haven't said already? You got my 10+, hope you read some of my poems, I would appreciate it, Love and Peace, Romeo

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Vanessa Cortes

Vanessa Cortes

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