Wednesday, July 5, 2023

I Stay Awake Comments

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I stay awake
most nights
short of breath,
lost in thought.
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Susan Williams 10 July 2023

insomnia is satan's footprints intruding across our thoughts--- it seems to thankfully come in waves---we crawl through the sleep=deprived days until we crash and sleep long and deep, have a lucid day or two--then back onto the cycle== top marks for this poem

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Thank you, Susie. Proud that this poem has attracted your attention

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 July 2023

Dear poet, your problem at this point in time seems involuntary. Have regular morning walks, take fresh air and relax. Furthermore, Yoga is the better solution. I think, these practices could help you instantly to get a little respite from this unwanted suffocation!

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Thank you for the suggestions. Your concern touches me, sir.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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