I Started A Revolution Today Poem by Eric Cockrell

I Started A Revolution Today

Rating: 3.5


i started a revolution today,
when i walked out the door.
ants lined up in full gear,
trees refused to shed their leaves.
smoke swallowed the chimney,
and cats laid down with squirrels.
and every ray of sunlight,
praised the coming night.
small children read to old people,
and bricks swayed to the beating heart.
tiny things became heroes,
and simple things became gods.
gentle words held road signs,
hobos shared their bowls of stew...
rain buried gifts in stillness,
for the awakened and those who long!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 18 October 2012

There's something magical, and no small amount of mystical, moving in this one. Very good.

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Dave Walker 18 October 2012

A great poem, where everything stands together.

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