Dear Abbas, very nice poem. I like It.
I suggest you to do just a little change in last line of the poem, is that:
But with tears of many years in my heart.
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Dear Abbas, very nice poem. I like It. I suggest you to do just a little change in last line of the poem, is that: But with tears of many years in my heart.