Tuesday, July 16, 2013

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In your Name O Lord
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abbas abubakar
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Junaid Ahmed 16 July 2013

Dear Abbas, very nice poem. I like It. I suggest you to do just a little change in last line of the poem, is that: But with tears of many years in my heart.

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