Monday, September 22, 2008

I Stand To Be Corrected Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I stand here
With feet in sculpted sand
I look out to sea
For guidance perhaps...
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Dee Daffodil
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David Threadgold 22 September 2008

Hi Dee. Having just spent two days at the sea side I know how watching the waves can bring these thoughts to the fore, but also how it can bring the inner peace whilst watching the waves come and go. A very good read thanks. Regards Dave T

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David Threadgold 22 September 2008

Hi Dee. Having just spent two days at the sea side I know how watching the waves can bring these thoughts to the fore, but also how it can bring the inner peace whilst watching the waves come and go. A very good read thanks. Regards Dave T

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Kris Smith 22 September 2008

That was beautiful and if only all Mondays started like thsi Top marks lovely lady Chris

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Emancipation Planz 22 September 2008

Dee...I will not correct you... for I have enjoyed your beautiful sea swept poetic depictions here against a backdropp of human doubts and insecurities.. you are lovely you know... aroha..

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