Tuesday, July 6, 2010

I Stand Before You Comments

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I stand before you!
My eyes are crimson,
So are yours.
We are torn
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Abubakar Ahmed Imam
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Hans Vr 10 July 2010

good poem. Feelings very well expressed, images well chosen.

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David Beckham 06 July 2010

Very beautiful pictures you paint with this poem of time past and present though all of it is not pleasant, its the sorta poem that bridges the old and new and makes lives. That makes us leave the past behind and start a new life!

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