Sunday, April 24, 2011

I Stand And Watch A Tree Of Sturdy Oak Comments

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I stand and watch a tree of sturdy oak
It braves against the rain, the sun and the gust
Thunder roars through its boughs with blast
Yet its leaves whitening in sight like a royal cloak
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 April 2011

Beautiful poem marked by amazing wisdom and depth. Very strong structure with great imagery. A poinant write indeed. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing..... Please read my new poems.

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