Friday, May 3, 2013

I Spoke Comments

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I spoke to the stream about the soft blue of your eyes,
After many a try to copy she failed and cried.
I told the harvest about the colour of your golden hair,
It tried to mimic a beauty beyond compare.
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R. K. Hart
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A description of pure beauty. Who your writing about must be that. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing it. Alice

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Excellent poem R.K. thnx for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 May 2013

good efforts towards purity. I like it. thanks.

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R. K. Hart

R. K. Hart

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