Sunday, January 24, 2021

I Spent The Day Looking At Myself Comments

Rating: 5.0

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I spent today looking at myself
...what I wanted
...what I could do to get it
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Susan Williams
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Jayne Louise Davies 18 November 2022

Beautiful write Susan x Thanks for sharing.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 November 2022

brilliant poem TFS

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2022

Really excellent.....thank u.....

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Anjandev Roy 18 November 2022

This is a fabulous piece..

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2022

A beautiful rendition from an intricate, spiritual mind.

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Anjandev Roy 23 January 2022

This is an absolute gem....thank u, dear poetess...

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M.J. Lemon 16 March 2021

Ego is more than just a door...Absolutely great verse, Susan. A perfect 5.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 March 2021

This eloquent poem reminds us of the importance of striving towards selflessness. With God's help, I'm slowly chipping away at the selfish part of myself. And this poem has just speeded up that journey. Thank you, Susan! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 26 January 2021

Excellent poem. Egoism is blocking our way to God

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

A fantastic poem with philosophical undertone.5*

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2021

Part 3. Loved this poem.5 ⭐️ and onto my fav

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2021

Part 2. One of my favourite poets is Malayalam has written "Anya jeevanuthakee swajeevitham/Dhanyamakkum Amale.. vivekikal"- meaning, the knowledgeable, the wise people shall render their lives beneficial and supportive for others (all forms of lives) and thus make their own lives meaningful.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2021

Beautiful poem. Metaphorical. We are narcissistic, we think more of ourselves. And such thoughts do keep ourselves away from God and godliness. They make us more greedy, selfish and self-centrex, too narrow minded.

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Bri Edwards 25 January 2021

Don't worry. If He's like the Jehovah's Witnesses, He'll probably be back! ! : ) bri

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 January 2021

Very beautiful poem, dear Susan! It has gone straight into my heart... : ) 5 stars

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Captain Cur 24 January 2021

A very eloquent prayer Susan!

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