I Spend My Days Like Cinderella Comments

This is a very funny poem with a serious social message to it. Thanks for enlightening us Asif!

great.......simply fabulous

I like this poem. The rhymes are so great.

Humourous and enjoyable.

Written well with flair...enjoyable write

Very nice poem--the desire of the moth for the star, the night for the morrow.

Oh the sweet discomfort of longing. A real double edged sword. Adorable

Oh the addictive discomfort of longing! A double edged sword. This is adorably childlike, not in the construction, but the memories it unfolds!

Oh the addictive discomfort of longing! A double edged sword. This is adorably childlike, not in the construction, but the memories it unfolds!

Very entertaining.Here is the waiting, the longing and the hoping which continue in time, a great part of our being human.

Only for him for the dance So no one else stand a chance ___ So lovely!