Monday, December 9, 2013

I Speak..... God Speaks Comments

Rating: 4.8

I SPEAK:

Heard some news, don't know if it's true,
Can't believe everything you hear;
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 18 October 2020

2 - re God Speaks favorites: " Her mind is always working, ideas always lurking, So I usually just sit back and enjoy the view" And: " With ideas that she likes to turn and twist; I recall...... fray, She had me wondering if I do exist! " HA ha! The last lines disappointed me; i wonder what they mean. But, hey, they are 'God's words', so i can't blame.....YOU! bri :) to MyPoemList

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Bri Edwards 18 October 2020

1 - re I Speak: " But the journey's been a long one, Sometimes pleasant, sometimes rough; I wouldn't want to repeat it - Undoubtedly, once is enough! " I 2nd that emotion! " I'm just waiting for this trip to end" at least some of your travail ** has been lifted this year. ** not a word i use, but another poet used it recently so it was fresh in my mind ;) (cont.)

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David Lessard 11 December 2013

When you speak, He speaks, when He speaks, you speak. We are wrapped in Him and He is wrapped in us. Let's hope I speak for all the poets. Wonderful write. Good humor. And know, your journey is certainly not worthless. God loves all poets.

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Brian Johnston 10 December 2013

You guess that I have a sense of humor and intuit that I forgive, therefore I AM.... and I promise you it's true... I am worthy of being loved by you even if I don't exist. Thanks for the chuckle! LOL, GOD (as channeled by his most humble servant who hopes eventually to write a book or maybe just a poem entitled The Humor of GOD.) And a big thanks to Pradip Chattapadhyay for introducing us with a fine comment.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 December 2013

one of my best read poetic dialogue with the divine. superbly done. no conclusion, no side of belief taken. great write indeed.

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