Friday, February 6, 2009

I Smile, My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Remember when we met,
we were a bit perplexed.
We searched the bay
and all its parks, some green
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

superb narration of a perfect date....................well penned

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Fay Slimm 06 February 2009

I just love this one - this piece has it all - the romance, excellent narrative and your final lines are so so honest - a full 10 + + + from me......Fay....

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Kris Smith 06 February 2009

Beautiful write H as a truly lovely flow enjoyed Chris 10 +++

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Herbert Nehrlich1 06 February 2009

Thanks Fiona. And here is what I think: You are a beautiful soul. Hxx

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Fiona Davidson 06 February 2009

This is a beautiful poem Herbert...so many images here...thank you...Fi...10+

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