Remember when we met,
we were a bit perplexed.
We searched the bay
and all its parks, some green
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I just love this one - this piece has it all - the romance, excellent narrative and your final lines are so so honest - a full 10 + + + from me......Fay....
Thanks Fiona. And here is what I think: You are a beautiful soul. Hxx
This is a beautiful poem Herbert...so many images here...thank you...Fi...10+
superb narration of a perfect date....................well penned