I slit my wrist
and watch the blood drip down
as it carry's away the pain
And as I fall to the ground
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Oh wow..this was a very emotional poem, but I know exactly how you feel. I have been in many positions like this. I hope that you can find a way to better deal with the pain life hands you. This was an amazing poem, I hope to read more from you. Great job. Sincerely, Crystal
I've heard from other cutters of how this truly makes you feel better...a sort of release....I pray you can find another means to make yourself feel better Cabby. Very powerful poem showing the painful emotions that are involved in cutting. Sincerely, Mary
hey mocked they teased and they were never pleased this part is very nice, your poems is awsome, i loved it very much, but i think that the second part of your poem is stronger than the first part, keep it up, love and care iyan xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx