Thursday, October 3, 2013

I Slip Into Spice Comments

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Where the dirty town ends,
The dangling dampness of night
washes away the grit of the day
I blanket myself in pashmina of privacy
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Susan Lacovara
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Raymond Farrell 13 June 2015

Wow, there are so many different thoughts have gone through my head having just read this poem. Some sensual, some more everyday when contemplating the utility of the herbs from a medical standpoint. For example, both chamomile and lavender can be used to treat anxiety and are calming. Good writing. Thanks for sharing.

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

This pen creates a sense of reckless desire and willful abandonment that I am seldom privileged to be in the company of … providing cause to surrender to dreams of pleasure… sweetly hidden in the grasp of future days… Well Done! Bravo!

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