Saturday, February 27, 2021

I Sleep In Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

i sleep in darkness
it's no pleasure
it's more emptiness
than love and leisure
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 October 2021

Thank you so much dear poets for your great supports.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Yes, distance really exists yet when someone is in our hearts, we will never miss his / her absence. Our love will close the gap between us. A beautiful poem brilliantly woven. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Through our sleep, a dream may come and it can bridge the distance for a loved one even if it is just ephemeral.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Revisiting this wonderful and discerning poem. Brilliant lines that provoke the mind.

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Li Su Pen 07 July 2021

Wonderful poem with beautiful picture and deep thoughts. Thank you!

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Varsha M 08 March 2021

I posted else it's lost. Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day Sylvia

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Varsha M 08 March 2021

you're right distance really exists but not in our dream-dom......so true. And this makes life even more meaningful so that at some point we make our dream come true. Do sleep well. Congratulations

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2021

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hooray! This is to my Alter-ego. Thank you so much dear Poem Hunter and Team

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2021

A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day. Your poetic brilliance is well reflected.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2021

Happiest heart understands the true love perceived through nature. Deep cascading water ripples in a dreamy mode. Silent night whispers still when dream does not come. Congratulations for penning beautiful poem with greater joy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2021

Wonderful piece of work! Many congratulations! !

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Adrian Flett 08 March 2021

Yes sleep is a mystery

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 March 2021

A unique theme and wonderful thoughts. So beautifully versified. To my Poem List.

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Susan Williams 03 March 2021

I find this poem quite introspective and poetic---5 stars

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Susan Williams 03 March 2021

I hate it when PH knocks me off before I get my post published

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Varsha M 27 February 2021

Sleep is rashphody. Eyes can inch the miles on geographical ground mind can map various routesto reach it but in heart even miles appears in centimetre size. Beautiful night poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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