Friday, March 12, 2010

I Sketch Your Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am in the river Nyle
In the Ganges water that never defile,
In me there is no guile
Perfect clean is my profile.
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C. P. Sharma
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‘I’m That’ [Jnana] ~ Veda…do you sketch Smile of God? Excellent poem …enjoyed thro’ and thro’ Sir 10+. Ms. Nivedita UK

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Amrit Rathi 10 May 2010

Only the poet like you can sketch the grace! Lovely write. keep on.

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Rani Turton 14 April 2010

Lovely graceful lines and soaring imagery.

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Elena Sandu 31 March 2010

To sketch the smiles of the loved one absent minded, that is a lovely way of showing your love..

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Rachel Butler 21 March 2010

'I am the scent of snow' Rachel Ann Butler

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Rehana Nazli 14 March 2010

Just in a blink of my eye I cover countless miles, When I sit down to write What I sketch are your smiles. Romance flowing like stream of clear, cool water in the spring/summer in your poem. I really enjoyed its flow in sketching your beloved's smiles.

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Lady Grace 12 March 2010

a very nice one..i like the flow..

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Sadiqullah Khan 12 March 2010

imagery.......................................

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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