Sunday, July 1, 2007

I Shouldn'T Believe You God! ! Comments

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I shouldn't believe you God,
sugars have turned rancid,
lemons have curdled
water's turned acid.
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Niharica Bhardwaj
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Jinal Jobanputra 03 October 2007

This poem is the first one to go to myfavourites............it is a sad poem with an optimistic end.........IMPRESSIVE

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Amrit Mishra 04 July 2007

Hmmm.... nice to see the initial despair giving way to hope in the end.

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