Monday, February 6, 2006

I Should Like To Admire You Comments

Rating: 4.6

i should like
to carefreely lie
on my back,
all the while
...
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William Jackson
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Abigail Keller 09 October 2006

Lovely poem. all the while anticipating your smile. Beautiful lines! ~Amber~

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Michael Shepherd 17 September 2006

A model poem for any apprentice poet, to show how to tread the line of truth to emotion.

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Linda Ori 09 July 2006

Such a beautiful, thoughtful way of saying 'I love you'. That someone could make you wish for time to stand still - such powerful compassion. What more could you want? Linda

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Will Barber 13 June 2006

Eternity in a moment. Very fine, the way you expand the image to include the image of the sun and earth. I enjoyed and admired this. The language is beautiful, and the message is very moving.

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Anjana Aravind 23 May 2006

A very sweet poem.... good expressions Anjana

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trisha evensen 14 April 2006

This is a very lovely reflection of adoration seen very sweetly, nice read. take care, Trisha

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Patricia Gale 25 February 2006

Lovely write that I should like. A way with words straight to the heart. Patricia

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Chuck Audette 14 February 2006

I love the languid language and symmetry of the imagery. Even the poem form itself seems lithe and graceful.10. -chuck

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Tori Ocean 10 February 2006

this is so content. so happy, and perfect. i realy like it.

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Beautiful. Lucky recipient! And if carefreely wasn't a word it is now... surely poetry is the ideal medium for neology!

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***** ********* 07 February 2006

Hi WJ, your poem is a perfect expression of loving bliss. A wonderful start to my day. 10 from Tai

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jonni o 07 February 2006

Such a sweet description of your love. The image evoked by the first paragraph though, is personally all I needed, but carefreely? Is that really a word? I don't think so. j.

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Solomon Brook 06 February 2006

A lovely thought of romance. I should like to rate it highly.

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William Jackson

William Jackson

San Antonio, Texas
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