Friday, August 21, 2015

I Should Have Listened Comments

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I asked for this romantic love
I, so wanted to have
You asked me to wait
For there's much better
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Marie Flores
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2015

You said, 'No..' And I weep like a mad child for this pain You caused me. For my feelings were trampled and I stumbled on the ground, yelling. fine expression of intensive pain. thank you

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Marie Flores 22 August 2015

Thank you, very much. I'm still a newbie in terms of writing a poem, though. Thanks again!

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Marie Flores 22 August 2015

Thank you very much. I'm still newbie though in writing a poem, but thanks! :)

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Kelly Kurt 21 August 2015

A poignant poem, Marie. Thanks

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Marie Flores 22 August 2015

Thank you, Kelly!

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