Friday, March 15, 2013

I Should Be Happy, Why Am I Not So? Comments

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I should be happy,
why am I not so?
Why am I down.
moving so slow?
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Unwritten Soul 17 March 2013

Sweet one, you did it very well and the end of the poem conclude the poem with sweet thing.....Anyway just be happy and think to do the best thing you can have and let the feeling always forcing you to be creative in closing the gaps and making life cheerful..be happy and you should to_Soul

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Titi Dale 15 March 2013

Nice work :) love this rhymes! xx

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