I Shot Her Down Comments
I shot her down,
I shot her down,
I didn't stay around for the night,
I didn't come back later,
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Short poem but nice expression....the language used is simple, colloquial, yet expressive....Best wishes for your writings
The language I use might be quite simple, cause my native language isn't English. But thanks for the comment and I wish you the best as well!
Thanks! I've read some of your poems and I gotta say I really like em
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7/31/2025 7:05:30 PM # 1.0.0
You bold the words by repeating the lines, it did give impact...sound like a song if you can notice the lines u wrote..nice dear_SOUL
Well noted, cause this actually is a song I made, I wrote most of the lyrics later.