Monday, November 5, 2007

I Shall Return. Comments

Rating: 4.5

I shall return,
To walk by the cool streams barefoot,
And munch on the thick grasses,
Listening to to the lullabies of the birds,
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Wesongah David
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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Very beautiful. Moving composition. Nice metaphors,10 for it.

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Raynette Eitel 05 November 2007

David, I like the message within this poem and the description of returning, especially 'my soul tendered to humanity.' However, I am confused by 'munch on thick grass.' I am thinking of reincarnation, but then you go on to say that you will 'write again.' It doesnt hang together for me...but I like the tone of the poem. Raynette

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