Saturday, September 8, 2012

I Shall Read To You Again Comments

Rating: 4.0

I shall read to you again
till the sun kisses you goodbye
and the moon, to me, says hi
i shall feed my loneliness
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luna tsuki
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Fabrizio Frosini 24 January 2015

a nice lyric, Luna, thanks for sharing .

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Khairul Ahsan 18 August 2013

A beautiful poem to read, to oneself and to someone. My favorite lines: i shall gather the words from my illusions and your mind and send them with the birds on a long long ride

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 17 August 2013

i know the feeling of reading passionately and untiringly till the sun rests and the moon finds its way very nice and thank you for reading my poems too. and you have cute profile pic.(smiles)

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Captain Cur 08 September 2012

Strong poem and the refrain worked well. Good write.

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