I Shall Not Give Up Comments
Never go for perfection
But watch own action
That shall lead to near goal
Then wait for beautiful call
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?? ???'s [3 xIf you want to reach the moon than aim for the sun, if you want to be perfect than aim for the one. 5 hours ago by ?? ???'s [3 | Reply
Mixed thoughts? Elliott Morreau5 hours ago Contradictory's in line 5 and 15? Mixed emotions or thoughts? Maybe expand or reorder? Ie: abrupt ending, break the wall What is the wall? What does it represent? Is it the wall keeping you from success? Or is it the wall keeping you from failure? Since once you break the wall it will cause your downfall? The ending is little confusing. But other then that i liked it :) Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago that is left to the wisdom of readers.. enjoy poem today
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well determined 5 hours ago by Karthika Mohan | Reply