Tuesday, August 25, 2009

I Shall Never Die Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Phoenix in me got tired of collecting its own
ashes to become a body once again.
So I allowed my ashes to fly.
Scattered ashes got carried further and further in space.
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Shakuntala Sharma
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Nalini Hebbar 30 October 2009

you will live for ever in your poetry

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C. P. Sharma 28 August 2009

It left me spell bound and speechless. Please read my 'A wish', a similar thought. CP

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 27 August 2009

awesome...........................

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 25 August 2009

Has shades of big bang. And the idea that in each particle of ash life is present is very a great expression. Liked the poem much.

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Only the ashes remain in the end.

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Catrina Heart 25 August 2009

poignant yet inspiring write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++

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Siddharth Singh 25 August 2009

Hmmmm! a truly immortal soul. nicely done.

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