Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, March 15, 2014

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Not far from body and arms
I shall stay near and cause no harm
That is clear promise with words
I shall be visiting you and your dreams…
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 March 2014

The ending though, I was getting drawn into the confession to become a pillar between lovers...Beautiful write and it will sure reach her ears because with a write like this, she is listening. 20 Mar by Munashe Mumbama to I shall listen

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 March 2014

Like 20 Mar by tano ann to I shall listen Very nice poetry

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 March 2014

20 Mar by B- O- T- A- N to I shall listen

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 March 2014

catherine lajul Really nice!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 March 2014

keaobaka though i did not quite understand some parts, i think this makes a good poem thanks

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 March 2014

Have Faith woww nice poem Sir, I like it so much Thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 March 2014

Aagam Vora, Maricela Ramírez and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta WELCOME a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2014

Listen me in Solitude! Jawahar GuptaLess than a minute ago See me often but not in dream Wish for it to happen in real Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2014

such a nice poem Justine JamesLess than a minute ago love the sentiment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 March 2014

Not far from body and arms I shall stay near and cause no harm

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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