Friday, March 29, 2019

I Shall Fall Like Dew On You. Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you love my poor and give them,
I shall fall like dew on you.
You shall bloom like the lily,
you will thrust out roots
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 April 2019

A great and powerful spiritual write that conveys kindness and the promise of bounty.. Beautifully written.

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Bryony Sheldon 30 March 2019

Lovely and heartwarming, with a beautiful metaphor! 10+

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 30 March 2019

a beautiful poem with beautiful message. ebeautiful imagery! love is like manure that grows the plant more to strengthen its roots.

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Leeann Azzopardi 29 March 2019

i feel the same way. I think you should read my poem " Mourning"

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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 March 2019

A divine message highlighting the majesty of the bountiful Creator. A great religious and spiritual verse. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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