I Shall Come Comments

Part - 2 the river side with your pal to have a dip in the cool and clear water of the river, and above all to enjoy all the rural scenes that greatly delight. I appreciate the way of presentation of this poem with thrilling expression. This poem is going to my Poem List. Full vote. May God nourish your poetic expression.

Part - 1 The glorious memories of the past in rural life is so delightfully delineated in this poem titled " I Shall Come" . Dear madam, you want to come back to laugh and talk with your one time bosom friends, to watch the Gulmohar in opulent bloom, to feel the scent of jasmines opening at night, to walk through the paddy fields, to climb the hill, to travel farther to

these lines again inspire me to walk along the rural lines, away and way from (m y ) home land I want to watch the Gulmohar in opulent bloom Feel the scent of jasmines opening at night Walk through the paddy fields stretching endless Enjoy all the rural scenes that greatly delight

A beautiful poem again! When we have come far, coming home is nostalgic return to past. It a beautiful experience. It reminded me of my return and where I was. Thank you so much!

Ah! What a wonderful rendition of the balmy days of home-coming! Lovely Valsa! I'm enamoured of your great write!

The sweet memories of one's own land born and grown is the theme of the poem and it wonderfully made by the great poetess.Though all paras are feeling the best ones the most interested para I think is the nostalgia shared in the sixth para which concludes as To have a dip in the river's coll and clear waters feels me most interested lines. Great it is.

Ma'm, you are a poet of nostalgia that creeps into the bones and souls. Fantastic write. Thanks for sharing this. (10) .

Groovy composition.A beautiful poem. Thanks a lot.

Groovy composition.A great poem. Thanks a lot.

A very refreshing poem and I felt warmed up throughout by nice narration and calm reminiscence of things of life....Valsa.......amazing write as always.....10

All us wish for a tryst with the past and this aspect you have brought out beautifully in this delightful poem.

All us wish for a tryst with the past and this aspect you have brought out beautifully in this delightful poem.

Hello poet Valsa I enjoyed the walk through memory with you, it was an enchanting poem, filled with beauty, life, joy, peace... very refreshing piece. Loyd

Memories of the native land stay for ever. The soul always cherishes to revisit the shores. The strong desire to visit is a real visit indeed. Beautifully captured in the poem.

It's a beautiful poem Valsa, wonderful..............................

good poem Mam...yes we all long to go to such a place filled with peace and silence, away from the roaring crowd, though for a while

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.