Monday, January 14, 2019

I Shall Carry You In My Heart ♥ - Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Like those flames of the candles
Lambent, plummeting yet shining….

Like those pearls of the shells
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M. Asim Nehal
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Tihama Hykam 20 March 2023

Best love couplets. Fabulous.

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Ricky Magnathen 01 May 2021

Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting…….

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Anjandev Roy 14 January 2021

Sublime piece....wonderful to read...

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2019

Five couplets, simplicity at its height of beauty. Lovely metaphors.

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 January 2019

This couplet poem has a beauty beyond words! It is one of those poems lovers want to hear, declaring their love for each other! Absolutely stunning!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2019

Candles carry the flame with power of love to behold. We feel this truth. Still last breath candle holds flame in its lap. Love is like dazzling diamond and fragrant flower. We shall perceive importance of life. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thank u so much Kumarmani Ji.....Your comments means a lot to me.

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Gordon Walter 14 January 2019

True love and friendship perfectly defined... Wherever I go, I promise, I shall carry you in my heart. Full marks.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thx Much Gordon, .

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Gordon Walter 14 January 2019

True love and friendship perfectly defined... Wherever I go, I promise, I shall carry you in my heart.10

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Bipasha D 14 January 2019

Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting……. Like those diamonds of the mines Underground, below rocks yet precious Beautifully articulated, loved reading the poem.

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thank u so much Bipasha Ji.

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T Rajan Evol 14 January 2019

Fantastic poem...Lovely words and phrases Like those diamonds of the mines Underground, below rocks yet precious

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M Asim Nehal 16 January 2019

Thx Much T Rajan ji, .

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Nosheen Irfan 14 January 2019

A beautiful assertion of love. Very poetic n enchanting.

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thx Much Dear Nosheen.

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 January 2019

lovely and sweet loving poem

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thx Much my friend Mahtab

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2019

Like those fragrances of the flowers Enticing, refreshing yet scintillating....ah, perfumed expression! A magnificent poem my friend....10

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Thx much Dr. Dillip.

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