Like those flames of the candles
Lambent, plummeting yet shining….
Like those pearls of the shells
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Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting…….
Five couplets, simplicity at its height of beauty. Lovely metaphors.
This couplet poem has a beauty beyond words! It is one of those poems lovers want to hear, declaring their love for each other! Absolutely stunning!
Candles carry the flame with power of love to behold. We feel this truth. Still last breath candle holds flame in its lap. Love is like dazzling diamond and fragrant flower. We shall perceive importance of life. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10
True love and friendship perfectly defined... Wherever I go, I promise, I shall carry you in my heart. Full marks.
True love and friendship perfectly defined... Wherever I go, I promise, I shall carry you in my heart.10
Like those pearls of the shells Secretive, hidden yet waiting……. Like those diamonds of the mines Underground, below rocks yet precious Beautifully articulated, loved reading the poem.
Fantastic poem...Lovely words and phrases Like those diamonds of the mines Underground, below rocks yet precious
Like those fragrances of the flowers Enticing, refreshing yet scintillating....ah, perfumed expression! A magnificent poem my friend....10
Best love couplets. Fabulous.