If someone asks me honestly
I shall reply about it instantly
Those eyes had troubled and fascinated
My ideas about beauty was from there originated
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WOW! ! ! Nicole Wallace1 hour ago The love and loss and victory of faith is very prominent in your poem. I couldn't help but love it. Comment +1 Love it! ! ! !
Antoinette Townsend11 hours ago I normally enjoy the poems that rhyme a lot but I have found out that a poem does not have to rhyme from line to line! ! ! I love this! ! ! Comment 1 Comment0
Some Girl Nicely told story :) 0 I would love to hear this recited
Will Dennis11 hours ago I feel that me actually reading it doesnt do it justice. This is a performance piece! Good work Comment 0 me too
tony right11 hours ago i tried to get your voice and find a flow, i get the poem, the theme is good, but it needs to be revived picture and sure doesn't rhyme...take no offense, i'm just trying to be honest and help
Let her occupy the highest position as ever for you adore her which is reflected so well in your excellent write. Thanks & best wishes.
If someone asks me honestly I shall reply about it instantly
Heather Burns your quatrains each tell a lovely little story. I'll read again soon. h