Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, September 13, 2012

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Those eyes had troubled and fascinated
My ideas about beauty was from there originated
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2012

Heather Burns your quatrains each tell a lovely little story. I'll read again soon. h

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

WOW! ! ! Nicole Wallace1 hour ago The love and loss and victory of faith is very prominent in your poem. I couldn't help but love it. Comment +1 Love it! ! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Antoinette Townsend11 hours ago I normally enjoy the poems that rhyme a lot but I have found out that a poem does not have to rhyme from line to line! ! ! I love this! ! ! Comment 1 Comment0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Some Girl Nicely told story :) 0 I would love to hear this recited

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Will Dennis11 hours ago I feel that me actually reading it doesnt do it justice. This is a performance piece! Good work Comment 0 me too

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

tony right11 hours ago i tried to get your voice and find a flow, i get the poem, the theme is good, but it needs to be revived picture and sure doesn't rhyme...take no offense, i'm just trying to be honest and help

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 September 2012

Let her occupy the highest position as ever for you adore her which is reflected so well in your excellent write. Thanks & best wishes.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

If someone asks me honestly I shall reply about it instantly

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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