* I Seek A Mountain * Comments

A bravura poem enjoyd lots! Each line artistic.

I like this one and obviously subject matter is appealing.Not easy to find new phrases, metaphors that can be used but you've managed it very nicely. For description and form one of my oldest poems is Daybreak..have a look if you can..overall reference should be apparent. David

i liked it a lot, ur really talented; ...........

Great poetry. There is excellent imagery here! ...............

beautiful i think every woman should read this. just great and i thought my poems were good

A poem which centers on the wonderful treasure, woman. a wonderful style that rise to the climax, woman

A lovely piece for women...

amazing as always I love the style you choose to write in

amazing i really liked it great job...i could never write something like this

SWEETIE, WE, YOUR FANS, KNOW THAT YOU DON'T HAVE TO LOOK FOR A WOMAN. WE JUST ASSUME THAT THEY'RE LINED UP DAILY AT YOUR DOOR, TWENTY-FOUR HOURS A DAY! EVERY PERSON WHO READS YOUR EXQUISITELY DELINEATED PORTRAIT OF WORDS WANTS TO TRAVEL THE WORLD WITH YOU, HAVE YOU BRING THEM INTO THE PRESENT MOMENT AND SHARE YOUR REACTIONS TO ALL THAT IS THERE TO BEHOLD, ABSORB AND EMBRACE. YOUR ENERGY AND INSIGHT RADIATE!

Well thought out write, women being mountains, good work Lynda xx 10

Sandwiched in between clouds Echo of thunder cried aloud i loved that line and i too would not be able to compare a mountain to a women, a man or anything for that matter! but you did.. keep it up.. i truly enjoyed this poem!

I would never be able to compare a mountain to a woman but you did so with great imagery. Good stuff n_n

wow what a comparison mountain to woman but dear sulaiman one must always remember the words of God 'Can a man take fire to his bosom and his garments not burned? or can a man walk on live coals and his feet not be scorched? So with him who goes in to his neighbour's wife-- none who touches her shall go unpunished.' good poem but somehow I thought of reminding you about 'mountain -woman' surely a 10+++ love anjali

a wonderful poem........brillant write....

beautiful write and very very nice to get on...............

I like this poem very nice :)

very lovely poem...................... thanks +10

It flows very nicely, excellent imagery :)

I read this as an excellent literary creativity. What's the difference between a mountain and a woman? I'm not really sure but I think there are similarities and one of this is a couple of hills or mountains whatever you call it that is predominantly located on her chest. If you try to climb those it gives pleasure to a man. While if you climb a real mountain it's either it gives pleasure or hard labor. You see my point? Thanks for the rread.