Saturday, January 24, 2009

I See You With Me, Comments

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I see you with me,
I see you with me,
Then I realised what I perceived is in man,
There is the man that need's integral,
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Abdul Karim
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Greenwolfe 1962 06 February 2009

I love that last line. This is a different kind of love poem. I like the repetition. Although it was brief, it is memorable. A good construction as well. A fine poem. GW62

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