Wednesday, March 29, 2006

I See You Looking. Comments

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I sit here in my window
And I'm looking out
I look at them and wonder
If they scream and shout
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Graham Jones
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Gina Onyemaechi 29 March 2006

Gentle, soulful music, Graham. I'd like it more, though, if the rhyme scheme was consistent - either ABAB or AABB all the way. Anyway, thanks for your comment on my poem. With warmth, Gina.

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