I See You Child... Comments

May you always see your child

Well written and very touching in it's tenderness. There is nothing like the feeling.

This piece reads very well, it is full of good rhyming phrases and I liked the repetition of the phrase - 'I see you child'. It brought the subject home to the reader in a tender image, and I was quite with you Ashley in looking at your sleeping child. You write with strength and certainty. A ten from me and fondest wishes. I have added this to my favourites as a beautiful love poem to a child - have you read my Child's Email to God? you might like that one. fond wishes from Fay.

a very sweet kind heart of a mother who loves her child greatly well penned and I like it. good luck and I wish all the best for you both.