I See You Comments

Your poem is a quiet and confident readiness for

Beautifully penned. A sentimental work expressing loneliness but even hope.

Read this amazing piece a lot of times. The content and the rhyme flows beautifully. :)

Fine poem dear poetess....thanks.....////

loved your poem Anne, Alan

you come to me through the dancing words on the screen dream, sweet dream dream and reality wishes and desires well portrayes my dear poetess. thank you tony.

Nice and nice to share the expression. Thank you.

fresh and beautiful poem by Anne Yun.So nice

Lovely piece of ART Anne! ! Tell me places my single life has never been..! ...yes loved this stanza! Thank you for sharing these sweet thoughts.! ! 10++! ++++! ! !

This piece says a lot Love poetry

A marvelous piece of writing.I will see you ever- - - -

I love the way the ending dovetails with the opening with only one but very significant change - the word NEVER is replaced by EVER. I take this to be a measure of your growth that the poem implies; it's an affirmation of the confidence you are gaining just by BEING YOURSELF. You're not forcing change to happen, you are waiting for it to arise naturally and then seizing the moment before it vanishes. The poem reminds me of Shakespeare's famous line

This is a lovely poem, its brevity quietly emphasizing the depth of the subject. Thank you for sharing this. :)

excellent...really sweet dream (poem) ..

Blood red pumping heart, I'd feel it beat, a sigh escaped, soft Lip's, sweet breath a treasure spent, that seeks release.. iip

Nice pen, emotional write, Louis.

A beautiful poem of love, thinking of the beloved. In not too many words, feelings of love and passion have been beautifully expressed here. Loved these lines: 'to nowhere but fancy dream can my heart cling dream, sweet dream'

Hi Anne, A beautiful poem on love: I see you as I see you never You come to me through the dancing words... dancing words - conjuring image! Thanks for sharing.. Loved reading..

through the dancing words on the screen 如梦如痴

i see your glittering eyes which you see never! thanks for sharing