Wednesday, August 13, 2008

I See U Everywhere Comments

Rating: 4.8

i see your face
in every place
while smiling
and when i cry
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Tareq Jalabi
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Ro'ya Abdulaal 15 September 2009

Usually, I'm not a fan of love poems, but that was amazingly written, well expressed and beautifully ended. Well done

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Adriana C 11 September 2009

you are definitively the eternal love poem!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Melodious lovely poem...

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You have written this with sensitivity and straight from your heart. As the title suggests we do see everywhere what we crave and I commend for your honesty. 10 Karin Anderson

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Ana Guerrero 13 March 2009

This one made me smile for some reason. I can so easily relate to this one. It's very scary for me this one but I do love it

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Stacey Nettles 11 March 2009

your poemes evoke so much emotion in me i love it. a lot of people write but don't put true emotions in it.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 30 December 2008

Good write! Keep it up!

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Truthful Light Treeclimber 27 December 2008

i can relate to this all too well, i love your poems they fill me with a hope that i cannot escape of more people like you living their lives for others, i wished on a star tonight that i may find true love within myself because i've given up of finding it in a guy

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Kimber Harrison 03 December 2008

I absolutely love it!

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Amie-Lee ...... 13 November 2008

Nice poem, thanks for sharing :)

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sara }i{ 17 October 2008

great words and great poem I luv it :)

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Whitney Nicole Albright* 21 September 2008

Thanks for my comment. I love this poem.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 September 2008

An interesting lovely poem. Love it.

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Amie-Lee ...... 25 August 2008

Bravo! ! ! I love this poem. It really underlines the feeling you get when you miss someone. Excellent work,10/10 definatly. Xx Amie-Lee Xx

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 August 2008

Sensible and touching.....10++ sathya narayana

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

good expressed........thanks

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Little Hatila ;) 24 August 2008

wow, what kind of poem is that! i love it...keep going...

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Aisha Love 23 August 2008

this is a very very beautiful poem great job

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Marria Attar 23 August 2008

Great poem....keep writing

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Linda Weischedel 21 August 2008

I have to agree this is a very emotional poem.

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