I See The Way You Look At Her Comments

Great poem. I think many people have been in a situation like this before it kind of reminds me of my 'A single whisper'

Another great poem Crystal! Isn't if funny how this always seems to happen? The ''good guys'' always seem to be with women (or girls) that just don't appreciate them. And that leave the jerks for the good women! Not fair. (Of course I'm excluding Todd from either group cause he's a good guy but I do appreciate him) :) Sincerely, Mary

Very nice. Smoking hot sad! The intense passion of the man for the undeserving girl and the sense of longing expressed by the unnoticed woman who only wishes she could be the true object of his affection make this poem an excellent read.