I see him
In the dawn and
In the dusk
Coming down the stairs
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A beautiful poem! Appreciated the theme and your usual simple and sweet expression!
Thanks for your constant support sir. i feel inspired and lucky. Regards.
A vivid portrayal of a loving old man's last journey in life. Very touching. Gleaned from the lines of this write, he had a blessed and enjoyable life. A wonderful poem well crafted.
That's a very nice and touching compliments indeed. Have a blessed day. Thanks so much.
A nicely related poem on the observation of an old man. I enjoyed reading this and visualizing him going through his routine activities, right to the very end of his life.
Thanks for reading the poem and giving a nice review. I have written this watching the activities of old men in my neighborhood. Regards.
an ideal kind of the old man who have natural heart that cares the second and third creatures wherefor he is ma e. an epitome of old man and a true man. great imagery! a lovely poem, sir! please read my poem Resurrection Of Donne'. your valuable view is needed.
Yeah, that is right Sir. Thanks for giving your time. Regards. Going to read your poem now sir.