I See No One Else… Comments

MM is a very lucky man to have a wonderful lady like you so dedicated to him. I bet he's just as dedicated to you. These types of feelings you express speak of a bond much deeper than most people will ever know. Beautiful piece,

I really like the light-hearted, almost jocular tone of this poem of love's confession. The way you play with seeing or not seeing the beloved is remarkable. That flat statement I might as well be blind if I can't see you shows how much you have staked on this love but it doesn't overwhelm the poem. It brings closure to the poem which began with the sheer uplift to your spirits of seeing your beloved even at a distance. I don't write many love poems as you know, but I surely enjoy reading them. And this one takes me outside of myself with the all conquering spirit of l-o-v-e!

An exceptionally beautiful poem.