In this fake world, with your love so true
And you always by my side, it feels so good..
False images everywhere, world full of lies
I see my true self in your enticing eyes....
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This poem is absolutely sensational! I love how you connect the ideas between them...well expressed feelings
B'ful poem on love..not disappointing to her or us...keep it up..
this is wonderful Mr. Rohit i really liked it and i du think it wil disapoint her thanks for sharing :)
accepting the person as he is, is something only some special people in our lifes can do.. and the true image of ourself as a human is only known to a person who understands us in and out.. even if they are our flaws.. seeing them with the eyes of our loved ones gives us an inspiration to amend them... thats the beauty of having such people who make us feel unique, blessed and special.... great write! ! !
It's a smooth read, nice piece! liked the opening line 'In this fake world.....'
Love the title and the poem...The eyes never tell lies..it is a connection.. Your words and flow always beautiful but this one is beautiful by it's own way...The feelings flow like waterfall...calming, refreshing and inspiring...Lovely! i give u 13marks...oh what! the max is 10? oh okay so i have to give u 10, and the balance u keep for next poem in advance..lol Joking: p..Thanks for sharing and inviting
The beauty of true love..we become so emmersed and consummed by it! A lovely sensual poem! : D
Hey Thank You so much for writting so beautifully this poem...... So pure........ I just loved it dear........... Words are short to say how beautifull is this............ Really will take heart of girls............
When i read ur romantic poems I feel myself drifting by a heaven stream somewhere far away. But i didnt know u can write like this by ur friend`s request... In this case can I ask u to write sth abt my lovely name? ? :)
You have not disappointed my friend Rohit but have done great justice to the topic. Lovely lines!