Sunday, September 17, 2017

I See God Comments

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I see God in the innocence of children
I see God in the clarity of the priest's sermon
I see God in the rainfall as it washes everything clean;
As it purifies the physical, so God purifies the spiritual
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Cherie Mort
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 September 2017

Wow totally marvellous. Creatively thought up how God can be seen, for all good n kind is divine indeed. I ESP loved the mother rocking baby line as I have another baby now. Yet each line is carved in beauty of truth and feeling n poetic acknowledgement of the divine attributes. Kudos I must say. Pls do leave your thoughts comment about my latest prose too, titled, 'stand tall and proud yet humbly bow'

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Lamar Cole 17 September 2017

Very nice poem about I see God.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2017

In innocence of children, in the clarity of the priest's sermon, in purified light of mercy of nature and in the selfless sacrifice upon the cross we feel and see God. Brilliant poem is beautifully penned is spiritual one.10

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