Tuesday, August 4, 2009

I See A World....... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see a world,
that always has a hope to hold..
Young colt was I in the fields of gold,
gumping all about with a heart so bold..
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Koushik Poolla
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Shilesha Johnson 25 August 2009

For we stayed together even at our end, as if we're born for each other's love... that particular part made me stop and smile for a minute... i love this poem..10+

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Brigid Guthrie 04 August 2009

wow.. very descriptive and gives a great sense of love and what it means to you. also how you see love. i adore your poem.... :)

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Andhra pradesh/India
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