I could not bear
The thought of you
Not being there
So I searched for you
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Wonderful write Sandra...your use of images is beautiful....Fi 10+++
Our search never ends........every one is searching for someone or something..........perhaps our search will end when we will find the Lord..........As Jesus said, 'Find the kingdom of God and all other things will be added unto you...........Good Write'..............
I find it rejuvenating....for it never lost hope to fine...someone who truely love...a special search that grows...beyond space and time a very inspiring poem of love and affection thank you..God bless
MADAM, , The pathos of loss and failure to regain is depicted in a nice way. I like it. One of my brothers wife got lost in an expedition to Everest, The boy searched and searched, couldn'i find and ultimately settled in New Zealand. you deserve A 10 from me. -Rajkumar
I liked the idea of searching in this poem which carries the sense of loss very well.
You portray the sense of loss so well in this poem Sandra, wonderful piece. Best wishes, Andrew
You have given yourself away in words very successfully. Excellent write. Warm regards, Sandra
My God.. i feel the same way.. u r amazing dear friend truly! 10 for an outstanding piece =)
A sad one. The feelings and the agony quite visible in this writing that it hurts, . Hope it's only a poem. Quite an extreme from Cinderella the master piece on Love.