Thursday, May 21, 2009

I Searched Every Bit And Corner... Comments

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I searched every bit and corner
Returned with empty hands
What was lost was hidden where
Wanted to know my palms
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 June 2010

Passion perfussing…melancholy has become so ‘High’…poetically …making readers to ‘Sigh’… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf

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Miriam Maia Padua 03 June 2009

touching and so passionate... very meaningful...really.. very nice thoughts.. 10+++ _maia_

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Thad Wilk 02 June 2009

Such a sad and passionately written poem. May you find one day, yourself in her heart once more! A most splendid read thank you.... Best wishes, *10*! Friend Thad

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Roshini Samuel 01 June 2009

A touching poem indeed! well conveyed too. grt work, keep it up! !

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Howard Johnson 01 June 2009

Hi Kesav you should allow us to vote, I would of givin it a ten.A most thought provoking write, thank you for sharing Best regards,

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Little Hatila ;) 01 June 2009

'What you lost was me: not there’ wow...very nice poem....10 Hataw

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Debra Joseph 01 June 2009

a very nice cute love poem.

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a touching poem, sadly said...10++++

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Makayla Straight 31 May 2009

This is a great poem

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Noha El3wdy 30 May 2009

thats great, i liked the idea.

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Keshav Prasad 30 May 2009

this is amazing...so wonderful

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

This is a stunning poem. The way you expressed your thought is dramatic which is wonderful. Read it with delight.

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Lady Grace 30 May 2009

searching to every corner..why you let her go? ...grace

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Aijaz Asif 30 May 2009

will our search ever ends, I wonder? ? ? ? I don't know what people says but I think it is another master piece from you bhayya..few lines from one of my poem 'I searched the mountains I searched the plains I searched the jungles I even searched you in the rain I feel you next to me but I'm unable to see where you are' search is still on thanks and many 10'ssss rgds asif

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Danny H 29 May 2009

im not gonna lie it wasnt your best, but it was pretty good i love the ironic ending i thought you lost, , very good on expressing yourself

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Priyanka Bhowmick 29 May 2009

u were searching for yourself... lovely 1...

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Grezlay Figueroa 28 May 2009

Wo0w- i just loved the ending. very meaningful i liked. ^_^ best of luck poet.

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Marilyn Lott 28 May 2009

A combination of heartfelt emotions packed in this short poem, Kesav. Well written! A '10! ' Warm wishes, Marilyn

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Luwi Habte 28 May 2009

this is ever best poem good job and nice idea Kesav

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Vidi Writes 28 May 2009

A feeling of loss from within Kept out at the palm level Tell the palm what it lost... A bit of solace that... 'IT' has lost... Then what about inner loss? ! I find a level of consolation here A third party brought into the screen To grab the attention from the main theme. Enjoyed the style of this write. Thank you.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Kerala- India
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