I searched every bit and corner
Returned with empty hands
What was lost was hidden where
Wanted to know my palms
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touching and so passionate... very meaningful...really.. very nice thoughts.. 10+++ _maia_
Such a sad and passionately written poem. May you find one day, yourself in her heart once more! A most splendid read thank you.... Best wishes, *10*! Friend Thad
A touching poem indeed! well conveyed too. grt work, keep it up! !
Hi Kesav you should allow us to vote, I would of givin it a ten.A most thought provoking write, thank you for sharing Best regards,
'What you lost was me: not there’ wow...very nice poem....10 Hataw
This is a stunning poem. The way you expressed your thought is dramatic which is wonderful. Read it with delight.
will our search ever ends, I wonder? ? ? ? I don't know what people says but I think it is another master piece from you bhayya..few lines from one of my poem 'I searched the mountains I searched the plains I searched the jungles I even searched you in the rain I feel you next to me but I'm unable to see where you are' search is still on thanks and many 10'ssss rgds asif
im not gonna lie it wasnt your best, but it was pretty good i love the ironic ending i thought you lost, , very good on expressing yourself
Wo0w- i just loved the ending. very meaningful i liked. ^_^ best of luck poet.
A combination of heartfelt emotions packed in this short poem, Kesav. Well written! A '10! ' Warm wishes, Marilyn
A feeling of loss from within Kept out at the palm level Tell the palm what it lost... A bit of solace that... 'IT' has lost... Then what about inner loss? ! I find a level of consolation here A third party brought into the screen To grab the attention from the main theme. Enjoyed the style of this write. Thank you.
Passion perfussing…melancholy has become so ‘High’…poetically …making readers to ‘Sigh’… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 hf