Saturday, November 21, 2015

I Search For A Shore Comments

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my heart is sinking in the ocean
i search for a shore
where should i go and swim
i have no hope for survive
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Hala Omar
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2015

i still need you i still love you return to me and be my friend You are in my heart and brain. a lovely poem on love and romance and the struggle of separation. you hve expressed your great longing in simple words. love your poem. thank you

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2015

Nicely written poem you are in my heart and brain but you went and left me the pain my real love be sure i am sinking looking for a shore

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