Thursday, September 8, 2005

I Say Goodbye Comments

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As i release from my fingertips what was a lifetime,
I say goodbye -
As the final river of tears stream down my face,
I say goodbye -
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CHARMAINE SIMPSON
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Shelia Williams 22 October 2005

I see someone else has the 'gift of goodbye'. Sometimes we have to learn how to love people from a distance. When someone is not adding to your life, you must tell them, 'I love you, but I love ME more'. Very nicely written.

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Jerry Hughes 18 September 2005

Charmaine, I've read your poems, and they're very good. A bit maudlin perhaps, but bubbling with talent. Looking forward to reading more. Cheers, Jerry

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