I Say Goodbye To My Bad Self Comments

desire to excel and help others to be the best Because my allegiance belongs to the Supreme One., , , , , , , , , , good idea and one must obey to HIS spirit..that may bring good fortune for self and others.....10

Highly complex poem with a serious message!

Poem is very mature for 14

Good write... Keep writing and good luck.

An awful lot of thought went into this piece for someone so young. You are on the road to greatness if you stay on this path. '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

My favorite line is: I'm sick of being a bad actor trying to be good. Actors can portray anyone, and they are trying to 'act' good when really they need to put their whole soul into it!

Quite a genius, keep it up!

Extraordinary and marvellous poems, far beyond your age.10.

a very inspiring write obed.one needs guts to change ones lifeout of choice.you have made a very good choice for yourself, and stick to it.best wishes. ritty

cool verses...a faith to God...a very inspiring write...10

this is such a sweet poem about change..you are still so young, so congradulations on changing the old you

I love you had finally defeated the evil within you. You are now new! Continue dwelling and His loving palm my friend and continue writing poem that inspires your reader. Love it! 10

a lovely, sweet and sincere poem..loved it..and so beautifully penned

This is awesome, a great poem I pray you achieve this goal and I think you will In Christs Love Michelle~

hope this one is an honest promise...nicely written and the thought is powerful..sweetheart..being good is a gift from heaven, ..being good is a non questionable attitude..so, you are precisely right..leave your bad self..be in your good 'you'...