Thursday, August 18, 2022

I Sawed Saul Just Yesterday. Now He's Just Half The Man He Used To Be. ….[ Look To End Of The Poem For This: ** ] Comments

Rating: 5.0

My best friend, Saul, and I had worked side-by-side for many years.
Yesterday something happened at work which brought me to tears.
We were working the night shift at the mill, making boards.
THEN I spilled machine oil and he slipped on it. Saul fell TOWARDS…..
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Bri Edwards
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Bri Edwards 23 August 2022

WHO/what is 'Bad Odour'? ? ? ? I want to look at her/his site. ;)

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Kim Barney 30 August 2022

Bad Odour and Good grief are probably the same person. 'They' do not have accounts at Poem Hunter. If you click on their names you go nowhere, but if you click on my name you go to my poet page.

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Bad Odour 18 August 2022

Lamentable poetry that even a kangaroo would avoid jumping on. Awful.

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2022

I'm glad you liked it so much!

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Good Grief 18 August 2022

Good grief! , what a load of crap. You're dumbing down poetry with this garbage.

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Bri Edwards 19 August 2022

Have a nice day

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Kim Barney 18 August 2022

Your morbid humor has elicited another chuckle and five stars from me.

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Bri Edwards 18 August 2022

When I edited the poem to add 'Poem' in the 'addon/add-on' of my title, betwwn 'The' and 'For', all seemed to go well, BUT the added word may NOT show up. ;)

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