Wednesday, August 31, 2005

I Saw You Naked Comments

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I saw you naked
outside my window

you looked cold
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Genevieve Surrender
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Rob Lamberton 03 January 2023

If this is a riddle I'd say the answer is snow!

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 March 2019

'You made me cold'! Love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Max Reif 31 August 2005

I like it. You extend your metaphor nicely. I don't know exactly what it means, or 'transfers' to, but it's pleasurable, playful, and intriguing to read.

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Genevieve Surrender

Genevieve Surrender

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