I Saw You In The Rain Comments

I love the thought you put into this poem and ofcourse the descriptions.. Lovely Preets

This is so amazing, I think that it maybe your greatest work but then how am I to choose you have so many.No, really, you do! Love Duncan

Wow! I'll never look at a puddle the same way again! Brian

Take a few small ingredients and make it into a meaningful poem. Well done, Mary Best H

poetic meditation on emtional freedom.

Mary, This may well be the best poem of yours that I've read on this site. The craftsmanship is excellent, the images clear and crisp and the journey magical. A fine and lovely poem. With warm regards, Hugh

This is one of your best, I think, Mary, a great write and great subject matter. Loved it immensely, beautifully thought out and presented. Love Ernestine XXX

This poem almost reminded me of birth, or re-birth Mary, it also expresses the claustrophobic feelings of trying to escape lifes shackles, very clearly in the puddle metaphor. I am sure we can all relate to these. It is strange how water, has a mesmerising, calming affect too. A capivating read, ironically enough! lol 10 from Tai

This is lovely Mary, love the way you descibed it so wonderfuly. Moyax

Another non-rhyming winner, Mary! You took an ordinary image and related to human nature in an extraordinary way. I'm so proud of you!

Mary, I thought this was very clever. I really like the way you translated the two stories with such a visual force. This has a sad air about it and is very touching. Kind regards Gyp's

Mary, Your abilities as a poet an commentator of life is increasing by leaps and bounds. Transforming a puddle from a downspout into a profound message attest to that ability. Very well done Rusty